A Technical Writing Course Aimed
at Nurturing Critical Thinking Skills
Author: Masao Kanaoka
Published 24 August, 1999
Designing effective technical documents requires
insightful and well-designed thinking strategies.
Experienced writers--usually good problem solvers--practice
critical thinking to identify the problems arising
out of conflicting goals and agendas. Problem solving
starts with problem finding (Flower 1994), and critical
thinking plays a vital role in achieving the resultant
writing goals. This article describes the function
of critical thinking and its practical application
in a technical writing course in an occupational setting.
A solid understanding of critical knowledge will enhance
novice writers' capability of handling problems and
making appropriate decisions.
Critical Thinking in a Complex Society While
critical thinking is the subject of some of our oldest
pedagogical studies, the dialogues of Plato, recent
literature on critical thinking begins with Bloom's
taxonomy in 1956. He classified critical thinking
into six categories: knowledge, comprehension, application,
analysis, synthesis, and evaluation (Halonen 1995).
Since Bloom's taxonomy, many definitions and descriptions
of critical thinking have appeared in a variety of
occupational contexts. Nevertheless, they tend to
have common or overlapping characteristics: Kuhar
(1998) simply states that critical thinking is "thinking
about thinking" (p. 80). Carole Wade (1995) defines
it as "the ability and willingness to assess claims
and make objective judgments on the basis of well-supported
reasons" (p. 24-25). According to Angelo (1995), most
formal definitions characterize critical thinking
as "the intentional application of rational, higher
order thinking skills, such as analysis, synthesis,
problem recognition and problem solving, inference,
and evaluation" (p. 6). Rather than fastening onto
a single prescriptive definition, Paul (1990) suggests
we remain open to wide-ranging conceptions of critical
thinking, since the concept is so complex in our increasingly
complicated society.
In higher education, Glen (1995) claims preparation
in critical thinking is essential for "true autonomy"
in such a society (p. 170). He explicitly calls for
introducing and exploring self-motivation and creativity-based
critical thinking in the classroom. If, as its etymology
suggests, a liberal education is an education suitable
for free persons, we need to develop pedagogies enabling
our students to acquire critical knowledge as the
backbone of their "intellectual maturity" (p. 170).
Higher education, as Glen suggests, usually involves
bringing a student to the front line of current social
discourse in a given, particular discipline. The nurture
of each student's critical knowledge, on the other
hand, demands a flexible and wide-ranging educational
setting, mindful of a variety of social and political
forces. Ever-changing social, economic, and political
situations require higher-order practical thinking
skills.
While fast-growing technology helps our society become
more informed, it demands enhanced critical knowledge
to make well-informed decisions: the power to identify
and analyze problems, generate ideas, and distinguish
accurate from flawed information sources in the daily
blizzard. In the US, for instance, the Scholastic
Aptitude Test (SAT) now includes not only reading
and math but critical thinking skills, and President
Clinton has called for new ways to assess such skills
in schools. In an interview at the 6th International
Conference on Thinking, at the Massachusetts Institute
of Technology, Robert Swarts, University of Massachusetts
Boston psychology professor explains: "If you make
a choice and can't come up with reasons for that choice,
or if the choice leads to a lot of negative consequences,
it's easy to judge that it wasn't a good choice" (Academics,
1994). The quality of thinking, particularly in higher
education, must be evaluated based on critical knowledge
(creativity, self-motivation, well-reasoned argument
for good ideas, and insightful judgment) to establish
intellectual autonomy.
Cognitive and Metacognitive Components of Critical
Thinking Critical thinking involves both cognitive
and metacognitive elements. According to Hanley
(1995), cognitive skills take information, data, as
their object: they encode data, transform, organize,
integrate, categorize, store, and retrieve them: familiar
examples are the 3 R's, outlining, memorizing, recognizing
and recalling, following a method or algorithm.
Metacognitive skills, however, are skills
in monitoring and controlling one's own mental processes
and states of knowledge; that is, they take as their
object the cognitive skills themselves: "Metacognition
is the awareness, monitoring, and control of one's
cognitive processes" (King, 1995, p. 16). For example,
Kuhar (1998) mentions two components: "identifying
and challenging assumptions" (p. 80). We might add
examples like weighing and assessing our judgments,
choosing among heuristics or methods of problem-solving,
judging whether one's unaided skills are sufficient
to the task, whether more research or a new approach
is necessary. In short, metacognitive skill involves
the deliberate control of what to think about and
how to think in order to maximize progress and minimize
error.
While this theoretical distinction may aid planners
of critical thinking curricula, in practice, cognition
and metacognition are intertwined: Even as a strictly
cognitive process, critical thinking is recursive,
in that students discover problems, make inferences,
reach tentative conclusions, then apply their cognitive
skills to their own conclusions as new problems in
turn, as they approach their goal. Underwood and Wald
(1995) point out that critical thinking, knowledge,
and skill are all interdependent. As we will see,
those activities that Hanley calls "cognitive" often
have a metacognitive dimension as well.
In technical writing, for example, writers need to
recognize the importance of audience awareness. And
they need to recognize the gaps between that inferred
cognitive state and their own. This metacognitive
skill plays a crucial role in the cognitively appropriate
identification, discovery, encoding, and organizing
of information. If they fail to identify the audience
level, their writing usually misses the target, communicates
with no specific purpose, and fails to meet the audience
needs. This applies to most business and technical
documents. Writers in the workplace, for instance,
take deliberate approaches to audience analysis
(individual-to-group level, needs, current problems,
possible adverse effects, etc.) while collecting
information and comparing with the past records.
In doing so, they find problems (in the past,
the current, and prospective in the near future),
develop practical assumptions and finally
make well-assured decisions to attain
the goal. Metacognitive and cognitive critical thinking
reciprocally reinforce each other throughout.
Enhancing Critical Thinking through Case Study Writing
The terms case study and discussion method
are often used interchangeably for role-plays,
written exercises, and other realistic simulations
(McDade, 1995). Case study refers to the use
of a case (a written description of a problem or situation)
to present a problem for analysis; discussion method
focuses on the process of the pedagogy--the method
of facilitating a structure or preplanned discussion
for students through analyzing a piece of material.
A case is "a story about a situation that is carefully
designed to include only facts arranged in a chronological
sequence" (McDade, 1995, p. 9). The function of a
case study is to create realistic laboratories in
the classroom to apply research skills, decision-making
processes, and critical thinking abilities.
In teaching technical writing, case study pedagogy
is useful in nurturing what McDade calls "first-person
analysis": identifying the sources and nature of conflicts
and the dynamics of behavior, preparing solutions,
anticipating and assessing possible results through
decisions and actions (p. 9). Students design and
apply theoretical constructs in a recursive, empirical
manner, going back and forth between theory and practice.
The more realistic the occupational setting--business
title, assigned job, specific audience current business
and technical constrains at workplace, etc.--the more
sophisticated and strategic the students' self-motivation,
self-insight, and critical knowledge will become.
As a professional education course, technical communication
seeks situations which emphasize hands-on writing
and problem-solving skills. Consequently, the quality
of case pedagogy, especially in professional courses,
depends on the extent of the instructors' discourse-minded
preparations--how practically and realistically occupational
setting can be presented in the classroom.
The benefits of case studies can be summarized as
follows:
- Emphasizing the process of analyzing information.
- Contextualizing understanding.
- Identifying and challenging assumptions.
- Imagining alternatives and exploring them for
strengths and weaknesses.
- Promoting integrated learning by incorporating
theory into practice and practice into theory.
- Developing critical listening by listening to
diversified thinking processes of others.
- Developing and testing theories of audience and
organization function.
- Learning cooperatively--teamwork, job, and collaborative
learning, working together in small groups and in
the classroom to solve problems, then to serve the
most goals.
- Experiencing, exploring, and testing alternative
ways of thinking.
- Considering different perspectives as various
team members present ideas, analyses, and solutions
beyond the reach of any single writer.
The case study method will ruin itself, however,
if it oversimplifies problem solving, provides inadequate
guidance for its social dimensions, or ignores its
highly conflicted nature in everyday life. Bernstein
(1995) concludes that any theory of problem solving
or critical thinking as an aspect of problem solving
"must be grounded in a more socially based view of
knowledge and cognition" (p. 23). Problem-solving
does not take place in a social vacuum.
For example, written assignments stimulate classroom
writers to enhance their active learning spontaneously,
but only if they are designed with care: Wade (1995)
suggests that writing is an essential ingredient in
critical thinking instruction, since it promotes greater
self-reflection and the taking of broader perspectives
than does oral expression. But for writers to get
their full benefit, consequently, written assignments
must leave time for reflection and careful consideration
of reasons for taking a position or making an assertion.
Writers need enough reflective time to (a) examine
evidence (b) avoid personal and emotional reasoning
(c) avoid oversimplification.
(Wade actually lists eight criteria for critical
writing but acknowledges the limitations of working
memory and realistic achievement in a semester course
that must also cover basic content: (a) ask questions
and be willing to wonder, (b) analyze assumptions
and biases, (c) examine evidence, (d) analyze assumptions
and biases, (e) avoid emotional reasoning, (f) avoid
oversimplification, (g) consider alternative interpretations,
and (h) tolerate uncertainty.)
In examining evidence, students need to appreciate
the difference between evidence and speculation and
to recognize that ideas and opinions may vary in validity
according to the strength of evidence. One approach
is to show students a variety of print or on-line
materials or audiovisuals to cite as evidence. To
discourage oversimplification, or overgeneralizing
from limited data, ask students to look for competence
gaps in work performance: For instance, what are the
points of distinction between pieces by writers accustomed
to high-tech writing and those who are not? Or between
experienced writers and novice ones working on the
same project? They will soon grasp that fact-based
reasoning, not emotionally-tainted opinions or speculation,
results in superior argumentation and decisive conclusions.
Internet Writing Assignment in My Tech Writing Course
In my technical writing class, I provide science
and technology news from the Internet. Most stories
are related to daily life technologies such as automobiles,
electric appliances and computers, and focused on
Japanese industries. In a bid to stimulate the students'
critical thinking activities with their accumulated
information and knowledge of technologies, I usually
prepare two opposite stories--for example, one success
story and one failure--in the same business field.
Through the Internet, for instance, I picked up a
successful cost-cutting and energy-saving story of
the Honda of America Manufacturing (HAM) plant (Appendix
I). Meanwhile, I presented a news article covering
the sluggish business performance by a Honda arm in
Thailand. Juxtaposing these opposite stories helps
students recognize the critical, distinctive and decisive
points in technology and business management: finding
and analyzing major problems and their source or nature.
Referring to the data provided in the stories, my
students examine numerical evidence and related facts,
and are further encouraged to assess evidence critically,
avoid oversimplification, or emotional or personal
speculation.
I urge my students to work on purpose analyzer--a
sheet with four critical questions in writing--to
clarify each student's thoughts on the paper. (See
figure 1)
figure 1
| Before writing, use the Purpose
Analyzer to clarify your thoughts: |
|
Purpose Analyzer
|
| 1. Why are you writing? |
| --Can you specify your writing
goal? |
| 2. What do you want to accomplish
with your writing? |
| --To inform, persuade, share
experience, or what else? |
| 3. What action do you want your
readers to take after their reading? |
| --Taking up a new action, reflecting
on experience, or what else? |
| 4. What challenge do you hope
to bring about? |
| --Readers will adopt your proposal;
they will change their ideas and behaviors;
or what else? |
This is quite helpful in designing goal-directed statements
of purpose which often appear in the opening paragraphs
of technical reports. Finally I give them some writing
assignments in a related case:
Honda's head office in Japan is thinking of closing
down its Thailand factory if it cannot drastically
improve its cost-cutting efforts, including energy
saving. The staff in Tokyo cite HAM's drastic energy
reduction as something applicable to the Thai plant.
As a staff member at the Tokyo office, your job
is to write an informal technical report that eventually
urges the Thai factory to follow HAM's successful
energy-cutting strategies.
Here is the overall problem-solving writing process
to achieve the writing goal--designing a short technical
document under a case:
- Make a digest of the Internet news (Honda of America
Manufacturing's energy-saving story) then understand
the whole text.
- Check technical terms and mark the parts related
to this writing assignment.
- With the Purpose Analyzer clarify the writing
goal.
- Design a short technical report with an argumentative
statement of purpose.
Assessment of Critical Thinking and Writing It
is difficult to evaluate each case-assisted writing
assignment as a whole unit. I instead try to focus
on each student's goal-directed critical thinking
strategies that can be recognized through the paper.
My evaluation therefore emphasizes the critical, logical
and argumentative context armed with scrutinized evidence
rather than writing with few mechanical errors or
various information just listed to support the student's
ideas. To this end, it might be useful to ask the
students to submit diagrams describing the dynamics
of their critical thinking processes from the initial
information gathering level to the final decision
making stage. Consequently, such evaluation can lead
to good writing . "Good writing is a process of thinking,
writing, revising, thinking, and revising, until the
idea is fully developed" (Franke, 1989, p. 13). In
other words, writing is not a static thing but a rapid
changing technic (Mathes and Stevenson, 1991). Writing
must be a challenge for the nurture of our critical
knowledge and intellectual maturity.
Conclusion Through the case study writing
assignment, my students in technical writing course
recognize the importance of critical thinking and
problem solving activities. Most students, as a result,
claim that they have understood the mission of technical
writing as a reader-centered written communication
(see: "the course evaluation"--Appendix III). In fact,
writing must be a metacognitive act aimed at identifying
the writing goal with a clear-cut rhetorical situation.
In this sense, critical thinking is the key to a successful
problem-solving strategy.
Critical thinking, starting from "thinking about
thinking" (Kuhar), plays a vital role in professional
writing. Because of its solid link with ever-changing
science and technology, technical communication requires
us to earn advanced problem solving skills. The more
developed information technological society we have,
the more sophisticated critical knowledge and intellectual
maturity we need to assess and cope with various problems
arising from our complex society. "The ability to
think clearly about complex issues and solve a wide
range of problems is the cognitive goal of education
at all levels" (Pellegrino, 1995, p. 11). To this
end, case study helps novice writers--unfamiliar with
how to solve problems in an occupational setting--develop
their goal-directed critical processes. A case, however,
needs to be designed within a realistic occupational
setting. A major role of using case, especially in
a technical writing course, is to empower the students'
problem solving skills, including information gathering,
data analysis and evidence examination. Writing assignment
therefore need to be carefully designed without ruining
the case study benefits aimed at fostering critical
knowledge. "Writing is a problem-solving activity--response
to a rhetorical situation where problems arise out
of conflicting goals and agendas" (Flower and Ackerman,
1994, p. 17). Consequently, the final goal of critical
thinking and case study writing is to make students
good questioners and good thinkers. When attaining
this goal, students will be able to make their thinking
visible not only to others but to themselves.
Further Developments The appearance of interactive
technologies and telecommunications, like the Internet,
digital cameras, computer graphics, satellite-assisted
communication networks, etc., has brought extensive
opportunities to change the conventional text-based
linguistic communication style. As thinking tools,
these pictorial and graphic media would be integrated
into the new development of critical thinking strategies.
In fact, Pellegrino (1995) notes that this challenge
has already began in technology education:
Teachers at all levels of education need to encourage
their students to use multiple-representational
strategies and explore new ways of thinking, such
as switching back and forth from linguistic to visual--spatial
representational displays. If we do not teach our
students how to master these new 'media of thought,'
they cannot benefit from the multimedia, interactive
technology that is increasingly being developed
and used. "(p. 11)
As Pellegrino suggests, technology lets us focus
on the logic of what we are doing rather than keep
track of all the details. Our thought, in both memory
capacity and its conscious manipulation, is severely
limited. Technology therefore has been developed partly
to facilitate and extend our problem solving strategies.
This is the crucial point of technology-assisted critical
thinking instruction:
Students need to be explicitly taught how to use
technology to relieve complex processing demands
so that they can focus on finding solution paths,
instead of using their limited information-processing
resources to maintain information in working memory.
(p. 11)
As a result, In critical thinking class, the instructor's
knowledge and the capability of new technology will
need to be emphasized as new criteria in pedagogy.
In addition to case study, several approaches are
available in teaching and modeling thinking processes.
The discussion method urges students to make their
ideas visible by sharing their thinking paths with
the teacher and classmates. Like case study, the learning
outcomes will be focused less on the facts than on
thinking processes and problem solving strategies.
Similarly, the conference-style method supports students'
critical thinking skills in interpersonal context,
in which they to consider the interrelations among
their thoughts and those of others. In the conference
method, students need to read assigned materials,
practice formulating analytic questions, think aloud
about challenging issues, all while respecting other
participants' intuitions (Underwood and Wald, 1995).
In designing the occupational setting, careful selection
or integration of these pedagogical methods will become
more critical for the benefits of critical thinking
education under the growing complex society.
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